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2017年全国各省市中考英语作文汇总新鲜出炉


2017 年全国各省市中考英语作文汇总新鲜出炉--下 篇!(附高分范文和点评)
第 8 篇(2017 重庆 B 卷 18 分) 征文——我和朋友之间的故事
在我们成长的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的风景。在相知相伴的岁月里,留下了 多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆! 某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me” 为题开展征文活动,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。

要求: 1. 故事必须原创; 2. 80-120 词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点: 1. 分享故事(起因,经过,结果……); 2. 表达感受(幸福,感动,思考……); 3. . ……
A Story Between My Friend And Me There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between me. my friend and

高分范文 【写作点拨】 本文是一篇命题作文, 并给出了参考要点。 由题目“A Story Between My
Friend and Me”可知写作的重点在于叙述故事,并表达感受。写作时,可选取个人 与朋友之间印象深刻,且比较有教育意义的事件。叙述个人故事,要用第一人称, 且时态主要为一般过去时,表达感受时,用一般现在时。

【高分范文】
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me. Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.

In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.

第 9 篇(2017 浙江舟山 20 分)

选书的理由
学校将举办“A Summer for Better English”活动,请你从下面的推荐书单中选择 两本想阅读的书刊,然后用英语写一篇短文,在学校的 English Corner 分享。
A list of books for English skills and for fun □ Basic English Writing □ Secrets of English Words □ Treasure Island □ Robinson Crusoe □ Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland □ Time for Kids(a magazine)

□ A Guide to English Listening □ 20 Topics for English Speaking

注意:
(1)必须从书单中选择 2 本书刊,并阐述理由。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (3)词数:80~100。短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。

短文首句:To improve our English, the school has given a list of books for us to
read this summer.

高分范文 【写作点拨】本文要求写一篇表达观点的短文。考生在写作时,一定要注意题目中
要求选择两本想阅读的书刊,因此在陈述理由的时候,要分别针对选择的两本书刊 说明理由。题目中给出的书刊列表“暗藏玄机”。左列书刊提高英语语言能力,右列 书刊拓展英语文化。考生可针对两列书刊不同的功能从中选择两本,并简要陈述理 由。

【高分范文】
To improve our English,the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. Of all the suggested books,I have decided to choose Secrets of English Words and Time for Kids. The first one is a book which may help learn English words better. By reading this book, I will surely know more new words. This will make my future study much easier. Time for Kids is a popular magazine specially written for students, in which I will read interesting stories and have a taste of teen life abroad. So it must be great fun reading it. By being part of this activity, I am expecting a big step forward in my English.

第 10 篇(2017 山东泰安 20 分) 共享单车之我见

如今,很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式—共享单车(bike-sharing)。它因环 保、便捷而备受青睐,但同时也引发了一系列问题。请你根据提示以“Bike-sharing” 为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示:
be convenient,less pollution,reduce the traffic pressure(减缓交通压 Advantages 力) take exercise… Problems Advice throw away, damage(损毁),be stolen… civilized(文明的),follow the rules,take good care of…

注意: 1. 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名; 3. 词数:80~100 字(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Bike-sharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and cities. more popular in many

高分范文 【热点解读】共享单车是一种自行车共享服务。自 2017 年,共享单车在各大城市
如雨后春笋般茁壮成长,为人们的出行带来了极大的便捷,有效地缓解了交通拥堵, 也为低碳环保出了一份力。同时,共享单车也出现了一系列的问题,如乱停乱放, 被偷被毁,充值容易退费难等。针对这些问题,各地也推出了一系列的举措来规范 共享单车的管理。 共享单车是 2017 年中考命题人的“宠儿”, 以不同的形式频频出现在各地中考试 卷中。考生在繁忙的复习备考中,要注重关注社会热点,思考社会问题,尤其是与 生活息息相关的热点。

【写作点拨】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题,根据表格的内容提示,写一篇短文,
表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时,考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点: 首先,阐述共享单车的优点;其次,列举共享单车带来的问题;最后,根据问题给 出个人建议。

【高分范文】

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It’s known that it has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpful to people’s health. However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them , and some bikes are stolen. In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful.

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